If the problem you have with is is the coloring, then you're right there with me, because I don't know what I'm doing. I have no idea how to paint in or outside photoshop. so I am totally experimenting. Get over it.
Overall I like it, but there are some things I see as I look at it right now that don't sit right with me, but I can't quite put my finger on it. Well, nevertheless I hope you all enjoy it!